tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261158031868182331.post248962271843416962..comments2023-10-26T07:51:57.603-04:00Comments on Writing Career Coach: Reading our old stuffYour Coach for the Journey, Tiffany Colterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07406173681188444952noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261158031868182331.post-62326323815537665972008-04-22T11:32:00.000-04:002008-04-22T11:32:00.000-04:00Hey girl, that is sparkling prose compared to the ...Hey girl, that is sparkling prose compared to the "thing" I sent in to an editor the first time (blush). Everthing was told, head-hopping galore. I mean I went from the heroine's head to the hero's and anyone else's that might be passing by. Sigh.<BR/><BR/>In a recent bumble, I was on a roll and couldn't remember the last name of a secondary character. I didn't want to lose momentum by stopping to look for it, so I typed Cantremeberthename as the last name, fully intending to edit it before I sent it out. . .only I forgot. I sent it in like that!!! I got a rejection but not because of that. The writing still needed work.<BR/>I was keeping my first draft ever sent in to a publisher for posterity, but you know, tonight I think I will take down to the brush fire and toss it in. :) Let go of the past, right? I've already rewritten the story and added suspense and took ou the headhopping.<BR/><BR/>For your paragraph: "Dreama, you're incredible." He stared into the fire not daring to look at her face until this was said. "You make me strive to be a person you can be proud of."<BR/><BR/>Hmmm. I think that one might need more help than the one you started with, lol. :)<BR/><BR/>Great post.<BR/><BR/>PammerPammerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01883119904346766083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3261158031868182331.post-70716685449858169152008-04-21T22:45:00.000-04:002008-04-21T22:45:00.000-04:00Hello. This post is likeable, and your blog is ver...Hello. This post is likeable, and your blog is very interesting, congratulations :-). I will add in my blogroll =). If possible gives a last there on my blog, it is about the <A HREF="http://telefone-voip.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">Telefone VoIP</A>, I hope you enjoy. The address is http://telefone-voip.blogspot.com. A hug.<A HREF="3050645784" REL="nofollow"></A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com